Colten, These narrative photos do tell a story.... but the acting looks pretty fake (which is ok).
However, you can retake them an improve your grade by using more creativity in your story. It is boring and predictable. You can also improve your grade by thinking more about the elements and principles of art AND compositional elements. (Your background is distracting... the photos are not taken from an interesting viewpoint...you don't use the rule of thirds, etc.)
Colten,
ReplyDeleteThese narrative photos do tell a story.... but the acting looks pretty fake (which is ok).
However, you can retake them an improve your grade by using more creativity in your story. It is boring and predictable. You can also improve your grade by thinking more about the elements and principles of art AND compositional elements. (Your background is distracting... the photos are not taken from an interesting viewpoint...you don't use the rule of thirds, etc.)